AlfaFranek's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Supercell #0013]

I don't know how to review a comic, but I will try.

I understand the transition between page 2&3 was supposed to be kind of like in movies, but I think it would be better if last and first frames of these pages would be somewhat similiar.

In third page second frame looks like roundhouse kick going on opponent, but then third frame for some reason inverses the pose to grab with leg? With how the frames go you would think after the kick there would some impact or counter, or block, or any interaction between the two but there is just change of move wich is odd.

I like the art style, characters are somewhat represented, but it's begining so it shouldn't matter, I don't know what is the story; Guess I will just wait for next pages.

BMBrice responds:

This is actually really helpful. In every other iteration of the comic there's been a chapter breaker between those first two prologue pages and the gym scene. I tried not including it here because of the Newgrounds set up, but now it seems like it'd be a better idea to add it anyway. Thanks for the feedback ^^

[Ziren Vocalist From The Brimstones (Reskin Mod For The Binding Of Isaac)]

Clean, that boob jiggle confused me a bit, because I thought it streches wrong way, but that's actually right. Also, are those facial features or some muscles from smiling?

Suicitem responds:

she is just smiling, i tried to mimic the tboi artstyle and fusion it with mine so maybe thats the reason why is kinda confusing, but still working

[The Final Battle]

How far are we from this finale?

[Engineer's Camp]

You got team colors wrong.

Jackcats0 responds:

crap (Okay I fixed it thanks for telling me that)

[cyborg mechanic (2021)]

Lemonade powered cyborg. Looks nice.

GothicCritic responds:

Yes, cyborg, on lemonade cravings lol)

[Smoked Fish Horde]

That's a terryfying army of Fish warriors.

[Picayune Dreams fanart]

Processing what is going on is tough.

[Pootis Engage EXTREME Pag 5]

Feels kinda long in comic for just a dropkick.

[FATHER_RUFUS]

What's his weapon?

UNCLEREGZ responds:

God's unconditional love.
And a shotgun, i guess.

[Chinese New Year]

Why is floor cracking up?

Kalmoire responds:

Cause it's cheaply made of concrete
...not because of her lol