AlfaFranek's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Undertale Apocalypse Sprites]

interasting.

[no more pretending]

Greed is fun, Greedier not.

["Well-well, what do we have here? Little parasite?"]

Sick

["I'll miss you... Mettaton....."]

Mettatons face reminds me of Kylo-Ren

["We are FRIENDS now..."]

Looks nice with all that flesh and teeth, but it is kind of empty. By that I mean there could be more stuff.

ARTymon responds:

I wanted to show in this work a type of "spontaneously made frame" shot on camera. Initially, I wanted to add more blur, but realized that then the drawing would become less readable.
But in any case, thanks for the criticism, I will try to take this point into account.

[Darth Vader]

Don't know if it's intentional, but Vader is normally smooth and clean, even after a struggle, and here he is with dents. Cape lacks dents too.

Other than that, it's cool.

Benriegan responds:

It is intentional, i like to draw metal worn out and damaged.

[Papyrus and Mad Mew Mew]

I wonder how finished would look like.

[When you hear mom and dad fighting after taking an "I'm Excited!" pill in the Ascent:]

First one is nice to eye. Second I will leave without comment.

[Guy with a Kaleidoscope]

Shouldn't he look at the device, rather than viewer?

DiscO-Zone responds:

I thought his gaze appeared to be directed at the device... maybe my perception is wrong though. Haha.

[Slendygal (old)]

That megamind head bothers me.