AlfaFranek's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Keep it up buttercup!]

Popeye arms. Energetic and fine.

[Behind the ice wall. Chapter 1]

It is alright. My main issue is the readabillity of what is going on in those black panels.

LegendaryStray responds:

awesome. Thanks for reading^^ you arent the first one to make that comment so i will note it down for chapter 2

[REFERENCE OF DEIMOS!]

who is standing in the background? you mean dumpy deimos?
Anyway, I like all of these iterations of Deimos.

Archieart responds:

nooo... A little further

[Leano [INCOMPLETED]]

I appreciate it a lot seeing many in game callbacks. Was fun.
My main complain is "Lean" morphing their bodies too little.

[The Red Thing.]

Don't look at the crotch!! You will get insane!

Archieart responds:

Hehehehhehe.......

[Potts (critique welcome!)]

My guess is that the lineart makes crow and gun standout more to background, but I'm not sure.
I like the design of rifle. It looks like it is made of wood and buttstock on it is funny.

MannDuck responds:

Thank you very much for the critique! :D
The buttstock was heavily influenced by the bazaars bargain from tf2.

[Epilogical Panels 1-9]

Just so you know, there is a limit of I believe 14 images for one art post (30 if you are newgrounds supporter). However there is an art contest happening on newgrounds in which submisions will have to post comics that have 16 pages, so the limit is changed for the time being.

SalamiSoda responds:

Thanks for the info, at the very least i can post the panels in batches! How long have people been able to drop multiple pics in one post? To me, it feels very recent.

[Clarah B. (ref)]

Nah man, you can't beat Wallace that easily. He is the funniest character I have seen in this movie.

Suicitem responds:

TRUE SHIT MA MAN

[I WANT YOU TO VOTE FOR PIZZA TOWER]

Yessir!! Good work.

[The cool funky bunny]

Cool looking, but is that bunnys face supposed to look high or is it just me?