AlfaFranek's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cosmic pixel]

Looks cool, but I'm mad at that gradient.

koko1578 responds:

Yeah! I didn't know how to make it look better

[Frozen citron]

Impressive. Untill I looked into description I didnt knew it was Frozen Citron, but nów I can aktualny see it. Description also really feels like script for some Animal docoumentary.

[keel jestah]

Poses like some model. I like this.

[Different Look?]

Looks fine. Your emphasize on shading is a bit weird, because clothes and rings have right curves thanks to them, but the light seems rather week. From first glance background seems to be some spiral behind her, but then there is shadow and light from the first plan making it more look like a wall and I can't really get which one you were going for.

[Keep it up buttercup!]

Popeye arms. Energetic and fine.

[Behind the ice wall. Chapter 1]

It is alright. My main issue is the readabillity of what is going on in those black panels.

LegendaryStray responds:

awesome. Thanks for reading^^ you arent the first one to make that comment so i will note it down for chapter 2

[REFERENCE OF DEIMOS!]

who is standing in the background? you mean dumpy deimos?
Anyway, I like all of these iterations of Deimos.

Archieart responds:

nooo... A little further

[Leano [INCOMPLETED]]

I appreciate it a lot seeing many in game callbacks. Was fun.
My main complain is "Lean" morphing their bodies too little.

[The Red Thing.]

Don't look at the crotch!! You will get insane!

Archieart responds:

Hehehehhehe.......

[Potts (critique welcome!)]

My guess is that the lineart makes crow and gun standout more to background, but I'm not sure.
I like the design of rifle. It looks like it is made of wood and buttstock on it is funny.

MannDuck responds:

Thank you very much for the critique! :D
The buttstock was heavily influenced by the bazaars bargain from tf2.