AlfaFranek's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nyakas Mugshot]

I like that smile, it's just free of venom (no pun intented). It's also weird humanoid snake, as in it just has long neck and skin, without the tounge or fangs. From what I remember snakes also have different skin color on "belly", if you could call that, and here lacking it too, she just looks like a lizard, altough not bad looking one. I also like the very limited color scheme.

Good luck with school.

MannDuck responds:

Yeah to be fair besides the long neck and the hood there's very little that could define her as a snake, I kinda just stuck with the snake description because originally she was meant to be one but I deviated from that (for the better). I'm glad you like it though!

Cheers Alfa! :]

[sneak peak for chapter 2]

Happy to hear that chapter 2 is so close, but this really confuses me, because it seems much to be much later than just chapter 2.

LegendaryStray responds:

yeah sorry im finding out this is misleading. my intention was to do like a volume cover but i missed the mark. ill clear things up when chapter 2 comes out

[tricky and his spine 2 years after back surgery]

Damn, that spine, nail in head and devil tail really make it top notch.

LEIXODEMO responds:

glad you noticed the tail, usually the fandom gives him some kind of animalistic traits and I personally enjoy a lot the tail on tricky but since he became a hell-like creature I putted him a more classic demon tail. ALSO, the halo kinda resembles the maker

[Egons Struggle]

No way! Didn't thought Edgelord is Avengers fan.

I like the gore, of it mask being melted so flesh, which can reveal an eye, altough the position of it bothers me. It kinda looks like it on the side, being one of two eyes, but then the mask would make much sense.

EdgeLordNG responds:

not an avengers reference or anything like that and look up madness sleepwalker, the visor on the mask is in the center and the eye is his left eye

[Drink Study]

Pretty good. From far away only leaves only tell you how they differentiate.

GAVITRAXmz responds:

Thank you! I tried to stylize the image a little bit and give it more of vibrant feel. The lime peels specifically got the stylized lighting which is why they probably stand out.

[Garfunk]

That is cool looking Garfield.

GAVITRAXmz responds:

Too cool for school.

[da samson]

You know, I started watching Boondocks lately and I like it a lot, but this Samson is cursed. Not a bad drawing, just unfitting.

PigDen responds:

I think seeing Isaac characters in the Boondocks art style might be something that will grow on you overtime, especially in later artwork where I use my time to improve on my drawings. It's nice to read that you've been getting into the show recently. I've been into it since near the start of last year and it became one of my current influences since.

[Queens of Harem 0.16 - Pilot]

Oh man, so you basically have a story of 4 overpowered characters. That is absurdly tough for any series to make good fiction with just one Mega being, but with 4 of them I struggle to imagine how it would go right, if it is about story quality.
Art wise, it was well readable. I could tell what is going with few confusing exceptions.
Favorite thing so far were those 3 warriors, altough it was sad to see them plan so much to just get wrecked by Overlord without breaking a sweat.

HenLP responds:

Thank you for reading so far, and I hope you keep enjoying it.

If I can maybe ease your fears a bit, I'd say: perspective is important, and our brains can definitely run wild with a lack of information. Hopefully, the subsequent six chapters will offer you some more assurance.

[Ides of March day 1: Icarus]

Icarus himself looks like he is made out of wax, but that may be just same color for skin and wax or lack of shading. Either way, looks tragic in theatre way, as it should.

PraetorNG responds:

Thanks for the rating! The use of a single color for a character is intentional as vases did not have shading (and also I don't like shading), but it might change. You may notice that the sun in the background has a slightly darker shade so I'll definitely experiment with that moving forward.

[Queens of Harem 0.04 - Pilot]

One and a half pages is quite a lot for a knee, altough the impact shown in the next panel is quite weird, because it looks like she jumped of backwards of guards back?
Anyway, good showcase of the capabilities for the Queen of Spades.

HenLP responds:

Panel layouts is something that I struggle with to this day, so old pages from 2017 will only highlight it further.

Still, learn from your mistakes and all that, improve with experience.