AlfaFranek's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fiendish Bunch]

This looks good, but could have more.
Shading makes everything look smooth which I guess is good for skin, but not really for clothes. They, with exception to white shirts, look like made out of marble or something like that. I think wrinkles should be more dark.

Not related to drawing itself, but could you try smaller resolution? I'm pretty sure this and other stuff could be done with canvass thrice as small.

MannDuck responds:

Aha! An actual critique, thank you!

Clothing is definitely a weakpoint of mine, so I look forward to impoving with it thanks to feedback such as this! I've just found out about masking recently and yeah I most certainly got carried away, hence the lack of deeper and more refined shading.
About the smaller resolution: I'd like to know what you meant specifically. Is it the resolution of the end product or the high resolution used while drawing that's the problem?

I'm sorry if I dont make much sense here, I never recieved a critique before, so thank you again!

[Freakshow]

Nice contrast between what could it do.

[Monsters VS Darkners~]

this design confuses me. It is conveyor-belt lvl but you have currency for towers?

Other than that looks nice.

[VH Art - On Dis Beach]

That smile does look like mustache.

[THE ORIGINAL]

This shiny legged companion looks nice.

[Hello, I'm back]

Woman with that wide bars is unnatural, boobs are drawn like they are some bags which mostly the case when character is naked and here is not, sometime the shading confuses me. Other than that it's alright.

[Supercell #0061]

I finally catched up and now is place exposition. Everything is so clean it's a shame that there is nothing dirty to contrast it.
Characters get struggles: Kheil is flabbergasted by not fulfiling expecations and trys out everything she can to get rid of that feeling; Ozs trauma comebacks, but he can hold cold blood; Al has to guide inspector without showing to much, which I guess the the other two will disturb. Every character is busy and that's good.
Still waiting for more.

[[Various Happenings] INTEIIp1 - p.20]

Noted.

[Supercell #0013]

I don't know how to review a comic, but I will try.

I understand the transition between page 2&3 was supposed to be kind of like in movies, but I think it would be better if last and first frames of these pages would be somewhat similiar.

In third page second frame looks like roundhouse kick going on opponent, but then third frame for some reason inverses the pose to grab with leg? With how the frames go you would think after the kick there would some impact or counter, or block, or any interaction between the two but there is just change of move wich is odd.

I like the art style, characters are somewhat represented, but it's begining so it shouldn't matter, I don't know what is the story; Guess I will just wait for next pages.

BMBrice responds:

This is actually really helpful. In every other iteration of the comic there's been a chapter breaker between those first two prologue pages and the gym scene. I tried not including it here because of the Newgrounds set up, but now it seems like it'd be a better idea to add it anyway. Thanks for the feedback ^^

[Ziren Vocalist From The Brimstones (Reskin Mod For The Binding Of Isaac)]

Clean, that boob jiggle confused me a bit, because I thought it streches wrong way, but that's actually right. Also, are those facial features or some muscles from smiling?

Suicitem responds:

she is just smiling, i tried to mimic the tboi artstyle and fusion it with mine so maybe thats the reason why is kinda confusing, but still working