AlfaFranek's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Democracy Demands Mobility]

She looks good and background is beatiful.
I like a lot that note at the bottom so no one would have doubts of wearing less armor.

[Ides of March day 1: Icarus]

Icarus himself looks like he is made out of wax, but that may be just same color for skin and wax or lack of shading. Either way, looks tragic in theatre way, as it should.

PraetorNG responds:

Thanks for the rating! The use of a single color for a character is intentional as vases did not have shading (and also I don't like shading), but it might change. You may notice that the sun in the background has a slightly darker shade so I'll definitely experiment with that moving forward.

[the show goes on]

The play with those glasess on them is incredible. They want to look cool, but they stuggle really hard to just have eyes open.

[Queens of Harem 0.04 - Pilot]

One and a half pages is quite a lot for a knee, altough the impact shown in the next panel is quite weird, because it looks like she jumped of backwards of guards back?
Anyway, good showcase of the capabilities for the Queen of Spades.

HenLP responds:

Panel layouts is something that I struggle with to this day, so old pages from 2017 will only highlight it further.

Still, learn from your mistakes and all that, improve with experience.

[Peck on the Cheek]

Tough love, but funny and adorable.

[Min-Min!]

Fun boss, well drawn.
Actually a lot of details from Downpour, like the leaking water, ghost, pipes. Nice.

[TITAN]

Reminds of Cyl from Picayune Dreams and tall characters in Hollow Knight like Hunter. Looks cool.

[The Whole Postal Gang]

But where is the Braindamage one?

In all seriousness, nice to see them all be the same yet different.

[Commission: Rocket Slime / Slime Morimori]

So that is the inspiration of king slime and cat forts from ebf games.
Great art, gives has a lot of personality.

[QoH X NEWGROUNDS]

Great Tankman along the drivers.
Will wait for the Comic with great hopes.

HenLP responds:

Hope to not disappoint.