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[Queens of Harem 0.16 - Pilot]

Oh man, so you basically have a story of 4 overpowered characters. That is absurdly tough for any series to make good fiction with just one Mega being, but with 4 of them I struggle to imagine how it would go right, if it is about story quality.
Art wise, it was well readable. I could tell what is going with few confusing exceptions.
Favorite thing so far were those 3 warriors, altough it was sad to see them plan so much to just get wrecked by Overlord without breaking a sweat.

HenLP responds:

Thank you for reading so far, and I hope you keep enjoying it.

If I can maybe ease your fears a bit, I'd say: perspective is important, and our brains can definitely run wild with a lack of information. Hopefully, the subsequent six chapters will offer you some more assurance.

[Ides of March day 1: Icarus]

Icarus himself looks like he is made out of wax, but that may be just same color for skin and wax or lack of shading. Either way, looks tragic in theatre way, as it should.

PraetorNG responds:

Thanks for the rating! The use of a single color for a character is intentional as vases did not have shading (and also I don't like shading), but it might change. You may notice that the sun in the background has a slightly darker shade so I'll definitely experiment with that moving forward.

[Queens of Harem 0.04 - Pilot]

One and a half pages is quite a lot for a knee, altough the impact shown in the next panel is quite weird, because it looks like she jumped of backwards of guards back?
Anyway, good showcase of the capabilities for the Queen of Spades.

HenLP responds:

Panel layouts is something that I struggle with to this day, so old pages from 2017 will only highlight it further.

Still, learn from your mistakes and all that, improve with experience.

[QoH X NEWGROUNDS]

Great Tankman along the drivers.
Will wait for the Comic with great hopes.

HenLP responds:

Hope to not disappoint.

[Cosmic pixel]

Looks cool, but I'm mad at that gradient.

koko1578 responds:

Yeah! I didn't know how to make it look better

[Behind the ice wall. Chapter 1]

It is alright. My main issue is the readabillity of what is going on in those black panels.

LegendaryStray responds:

awesome. Thanks for reading^^ you arent the first one to make that comment so i will note it down for chapter 2

[REFERENCE OF DEIMOS!]

who is standing in the background? you mean dumpy deimos?
Anyway, I like all of these iterations of Deimos.

Archieart responds:

nooo... A little further

[The Red Thing.]

Don't look at the crotch!! You will get insane!

Archieart responds:

Hehehehhehe.......

[Potts (critique welcome!)]

My guess is that the lineart makes crow and gun standout more to background, but I'm not sure.
I like the design of rifle. It looks like it is made of wood and buttstock on it is funny.

MannDuck responds:

Thank you very much for the critique! :D
The buttstock was heavily influenced by the bazaars bargain from tf2.

[Clarah B. (ref)]

Nah man, you can't beat Wallace that easily. He is the funniest character I have seen in this movie.

Suicitem responds:

TRUE SHIT MA MAN