AlfaFranek's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Guinea Pig]

looks flat with that shading.

Benriegan responds:

Indeed, i drew that before i started practicing shading and anatomy, it was like 2 months ago, i've learned some new stuff lately, which i apply to my new artwork.

[durgs]

is this supposed to be that one scene from family guy?

PigDen responds:

Yes, I intended to reference both Moral Orel and Family Guy.

["We are FRIENDS now..."]

Looks nice with all that flesh and teeth, but it is kind of empty. By that I mean there could be more stuff.

ARTymon responds:

I wanted to show in this work a type of "spontaneously made frame" shot on camera. Initially, I wanted to add more blur, but realized that then the drawing would become less readable.
But in any case, thanks for the criticism, I will try to take this point into account.

[Darth Vader]

Don't know if it's intentional, but Vader is normally smooth and clean, even after a struggle, and here he is with dents. Cape lacks dents too.

Other than that, it's cool.

Benriegan responds:

It is intentional, i like to draw metal worn out and damaged.

[Guy with a Kaleidoscope]

Shouldn't he look at the device, rather than viewer?

DiscO-Zone responds:

I thought his gaze appeared to be directed at the device... maybe my perception is wrong though. Haha.

[Shadow]

Looks nice, but then his mouth bothers me. Is it how mouth is drawn for characters in Sonic series?

veele responds:

That's pretty much how all character's mouths look like in Sonic

[Beth of any]

Why nerd?

PigDen responds:

eh... why not? the glasses fits her. I also gave glasses to Judas if you've seen it.

[why hello there]

Is it shirt extending to the helmet or is it body with tie?

SockDotClip responds:

his hood and helmet are part of his body, his suit, tie and gloves aren't

[Early Kill]

Could use some organs on floor.
Other than that it's cool.

AntonM responds:

True

[Nymph]

Reminded me of mithological Amazons, especially with that small breast.

DiscO-Zone responds:

Yeah, I tend to go too far with the "shredded" look. I'm happy to hear the Amazon comparison though. Thank you for the rating.