AlfaFranek's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fiendish Bunch]

This looks good, but could have more.
Shading makes everything look smooth which I guess is good for skin, but not really for clothes. They, with exception to white shirts, look like made out of marble or something like that. I think wrinkles should be more dark.

Not related to drawing itself, but could you try smaller resolution? I'm pretty sure this and other stuff could be done with canvass thrice as small.

MannDuck responds:

Aha! An actual critique, thank you!

Clothing is definitely a weakpoint of mine, so I look forward to impoving with it thanks to feedback such as this! I've just found out about masking recently and yeah I most certainly got carried away, hence the lack of deeper and more refined shading.
About the smaller resolution: I'd like to know what you meant specifically. Is it the resolution of the end product or the high resolution used while drawing that's the problem?

I'm sorry if I dont make much sense here, I never recieved a critique before, so thank you again!

[Supercell #0013]

I don't know how to review a comic, but I will try.

I understand the transition between page 2&3 was supposed to be kind of like in movies, but I think it would be better if last and first frames of these pages would be somewhat similiar.

In third page second frame looks like roundhouse kick going on opponent, but then third frame for some reason inverses the pose to grab with leg? With how the frames go you would think after the kick there would some impact or counter, or block, or any interaction between the two but there is just change of move wich is odd.

I like the art style, characters are somewhat represented, but it's begining so it shouldn't matter, I don't know what is the story; Guess I will just wait for next pages.

BMBrice responds:

This is actually really helpful. In every other iteration of the comic there's been a chapter breaker between those first two prologue pages and the gym scene. I tried not including it here because of the Newgrounds set up, but now it seems like it'd be a better idea to add it anyway. Thanks for the feedback ^^

[Ziren Vocalist From The Brimstones (Reskin Mod For The Binding Of Isaac)]

Clean, that boob jiggle confused me a bit, because I thought it streches wrong way, but that's actually right. Also, are those facial features or some muscles from smiling?

Suicitem responds:

she is just smiling, i tried to mimic the tboi artstyle and fusion it with mine so maybe thats the reason why is kinda confusing, but still working

[Engineer's Camp]

You got team colors wrong.

Jackcats0 responds:

crap (Okay I fixed it thanks for telling me that)

[cyborg mechanic (2021)]

Lemonade powered cyborg. Looks nice.

GothicCritic responds:

Yes, cyborg, on lemonade cravings lol)

[FATHER_RUFUS]

What's his weapon?

UNCLEREGZ responds:

God's unconditional love.
And a shotgun, i guess.

[Chinese New Year]

Why is floor cracking up?

Kalmoire responds:

Cause it's cheaply made of concrete
...not because of her lol

[Datsalti and Datsimple's ocs]

I love when there is art and then just some simple goofy edit.

SquashHead responds:

Little bit of fun haha

[Guinea Pig]

looks flat with that shading.

Benriegan responds:

Indeed, i drew that before i started practicing shading and anatomy, it was like 2 months ago, i've learned some new stuff lately, which i apply to my new artwork.

[durgs]

is this supposed to be that one scene from family guy?

PigDen responds:

Yes, I intended to reference both Moral Orel and Family Guy.