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[Queens of Harem 0.16 - Pilot]

Oh man, so you basically have a story of 4 overpowered characters. That is absurdly tough for any series to make good fiction with just one Mega being, but with 4 of them I struggle to imagine how it would go right, if it is about story quality.
Art wise, it was well readable. I could tell what is going with few confusing exceptions.
Favorite thing so far were those 3 warriors, altough it was sad to see them plan so much to just get wrecked by Overlord without breaking a sweat.

HenLP responds:

Thank you for reading so far, and I hope you keep enjoying it.

If I can maybe ease your fears a bit, I'd say: perspective is important, and our brains can definitely run wild with a lack of information. Hopefully, the subsequent six chapters will offer you some more assurance.

[Zora - Be My Hero]

Nice dress and smile, very charming.

[Milestone, if you can call it that]

Congrats. It is intresting to see someone celebrate with multiple of done works, rather than a single one. I also love how that one npc looks even more like Wayne after the comparison. Also first in a long time I see someone have more followers on NG than Twitter, which is impressive.
If it is about a game in flash then you could always try something with buttons that have "gotoAndPlay()" which is how most people did if they didn't knew how to code.

[SEMTEX: The beach episode]

I wonder a lot how you manage to do cool art piece with stupid little elements like that.
Different example would be that one art with ng girl showing tattoo with Sanford. It was cool and yet silly with way she described him. Luckily, that kind of stupidity is my kind of humor.

[UNDERPENIS (😭😢FLOWEY JUNE BEAM)]

I love the light from Hearts reflecting on Frisks skin, it is sick. Beside that, this comic is also funny, so yeah, props to that

[Goku kills The Noise]

Cool stuff.
I played the update and even if Goku beats The Noise, but he ain't ready for Noisette.

[Democracy Demands Mobility]

She looks good and background is beatiful.
I like a lot that note at the bottom so no one would have doubts of wearing less armor.

[Ides of March day 1: Icarus]

Icarus himself looks like he is made out of wax, but that may be just same color for skin and wax or lack of shading. Either way, looks tragic in theatre way, as it should.

PraetorNG responds:

Thanks for the rating! The use of a single color for a character is intentional as vases did not have shading (and also I don't like shading), but it might change. You may notice that the sun in the background has a slightly darker shade so I'll definitely experiment with that moving forward.

[the show goes on]

The play with those glasess on them is incredible. They want to look cool, but they stuggle really hard to just have eyes open.

[Queens of Harem 0.04 - Pilot]

One and a half pages is quite a lot for a knee, altough the impact shown in the next panel is quite weird, because it looks like she jumped of backwards of guards back?
Anyway, good showcase of the capabilities for the Queen of Spades.

HenLP responds:

Panel layouts is something that I struggle with to this day, so old pages from 2017 will only highlight it further.

Still, learn from your mistakes and all that, improve with experience.