AlfaFranek's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snake and Lisa Sue's Halloween Comics]

I would like to point out, that either in manga or comics, the speech bubble has a curved triangle and the thought bubble uses increasing in size dots. Mangas sometimes also use just text around enviroment to show the narrating stand point of a character.
So, this just looks like some telephatic stand off.

[Nyakas Mugshot]

I like that smile, it's just free of venom (no pun intented). It's also weird humanoid snake, as in it just has long neck and skin, without the tounge or fangs. From what I remember snakes also have different skin color on "belly", if you could call that, and here lacking it too, she just looks like a lizard, altough not bad looking one. I also like the very limited color scheme.

Good luck with school.

MannDuck responds:

Yeah to be fair besides the long neck and the hood there's very little that could define her as a snake, I kinda just stuck with the snake description because originally she was meant to be one but I deviated from that (for the better). I'm glad you like it though!

Cheers Alfa! :]

[Awakening]

He looks very pissed, as he should. Thing that for me is undermined a bit is enviroment destruction, but it do be like this.

[Kenshiro]

Ngl, if you would tell me it's Jonathan Joestar, I would believe you too. These 2 guys are so similiar.
Good work eitherway.

[sneak peak for chapter 2]

Happy to hear that chapter 2 is so close, but this really confuses me, because it seems much to be much later than just chapter 2.

LegendaryStray responds:

yeah sorry im finding out this is misleading. my intention was to do like a volume cover but i missed the mark. ill clear things up when chapter 2 comes out

[Fear and Hunger D'arce]

Looks good, but I can't unsee that one fricking meme.

[For the ladies (and fellas)]

Don't worry, even if you forget I will oversee that.

[Mysterious traveller]

She looks great, altough it is too brigh for me to give it title "mystery" and too bright for the lantern to have sense. Regardless of that, I still like it.

[Rusty Bloom]

Maybe it didnt turn out the best, but idea, vibe and effort are still there.
My friend that loves the scrapyard aesthetic said he thinks this is great.

[Messmer the Impaler]

Looks too lively, or rather not dead inside for a souls game, but I bet he kicks players ass nonetheless.
Design is cool, but the snake on his body looks to have a head on both ends of body, while in the background there are to normal ones. That's a big stretch from my side, but that gets to show how well it's done if I'm just pointing minor detail like that.