AlfaFranek's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kicking Practice]

One is ball juggler, the other is ball loser.
Cool and funny

[Nerus "Glaceon" vs Modified Dib "Pikachu" Dbz style (Uvilicius chapter 9's fight part)]

60 fps is too much man, especially when so much is going on the screen. It just hurts eyes, which is a shame because there is a lot of effort. Beside that, the slash effects are making it a tough to get to see their way of fighting.
I give 3 stars for effort, but I don't really like it.

Vileka responds:

It's understandable, maybe for this particular fight I should have done it at 25fps for that reason, thanks for the feedback!

[weapons manufacturer]

Movement is fine and nice to see something different than just violence, but there is not happening much there. If it is about audio, I think it was all right, but if you don't want to use music in background, then I recommend you use quiet sounds for steps in walk.
It was fine.

ToxicWimbleton responds:

Thank you very much for your observation, the issue of background music is something that I have to resolve and I promise to do so, but for now I am glad that you liked the video and if you want to leave another suggestion, do not hesitate to do so.

[MORTAL HORIZON]

Pretty good for first time.

[How to cook]

audio compressing is really bad you can barely understand anything. it is also to loud. another thing is that after getting redirected you can't play that movie anymore.

Tonezanimation responds:

silly bro its april fools and I intend to do that

[Shao Kahn VS Gouki]

This is first time I see someone use mortal kombat sprites in movie like this. The tension you tried to do at begining was half right done, because Shao Kahn has more dynamic angles of camera, it being shaken from movement, being close up sprite, further camera sprite, while Gouki is just standing and doing pretty much nothing. Fight was alright, but could be better.

StridingSpark responds:

I appreciate the feedback! Thanks for checking it out. Can I ask how the fight could've been better? Was it the choreography or maybe pacing?

[SKREWARM!! Chapter 2 END]

Man, you could for music here on ng to not get copyrighted, and even then why Sneaky Snitch? McLeod made about hundred pieces and I'm sure at least one would fit.
If it is about sound effects, it is completely different story. With music, its distributors give a strike, but there is nothing like that with sounds and still, and still all of those sfx you used for yt version I have heard somewhere before here, on newgrounds, so they could at least stay, so at least it wouldn't be half as goofy as it is now.

[Snowballer Shuffle || A Short Animation / Music Video]

It may be bad, but is still charming.

SnowballerStudios responds:

I understand. :)

[Pilot- [Welcome To Blithe Street ep. 1]]

Great stuff, made me laugh often. For some reason, I sometimes had problems with underastanding said words and I don't know if it is my issue or it was here, but other than that audio was very good.

HisCoconutGun responds:

Nah its probably a me problem, the audio was a little iffy here and there, some lines were a bit muffled, but eh, whatcha gonna do. Hopefully next time its a bit more clear

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