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[MADNESS COMBAT [AAHW ADVERTISEMENT]]

I like that assortment of weapon showcases, especially because they are not fully going as planned for AAHW. Very good stuff.
I have 2 small issuess. First is that some dialouge lines appear to short to read with the flow of movie. Second are the lasors. They are very basic looking, comparing to anything else in movie.

ARaffiGan responds:

Yeah i notice that some effect has many issue at exporting, thank you for feedback!

[Nerus "Glaceon" vs Modified Dib "Pikachu" Dbz style (Uvilicius chapter 9's fight part)]

60 fps is too much man, especially when so much is going on the screen. It just hurts eyes, which is a shame because there is a lot of effort. Beside that, the slash effects are making it a tough to get to see their way of fighting.
I give 3 stars for effort, but I don't really like it.

Vileka responds:

It's understandable, maybe for this particular fight I should have done it at 25fps for that reason, thanks for the feedback!

[weapons manufacturer]

Movement is fine and nice to see something different than just violence, but there is not happening much there. If it is about audio, I think it was all right, but if you don't want to use music in background, then I recommend you use quiet sounds for steps in walk.
It was fine.

ToxicWimbleton responds:

Thank you very much for your observation, the issue of background music is something that I have to resolve and I promise to do so, but for now I am glad that you liked the video and if you want to leave another suggestion, do not hesitate to do so.

[How to cook]

audio compressing is really bad you can barely understand anything. it is also to loud. another thing is that after getting redirected you can't play that movie anymore.

Tonezanimation responds:

silly bro its april fools and I intend to do that

[Shao Kahn VS Gouki]

This is first time I see someone use mortal kombat sprites in movie like this. The tension you tried to do at begining was half right done, because Shao Kahn has more dynamic angles of camera, it being shaken from movement, being close up sprite, further camera sprite, while Gouki is just standing and doing pretty much nothing. Fight was alright, but could be better.

StridingSpark responds:

I appreciate the feedback! Thanks for checking it out. Can I ask how the fight could've been better? Was it the choreography or maybe pacing?

[Snowballer Shuffle || A Short Animation / Music Video]

It may be bad, but is still charming.

SnowballerStudios responds:

I understand. :)

[Pilot- [Welcome To Blithe Street ep. 1]]

Great stuff, made me laugh often. For some reason, I sometimes had problems with underastanding said words and I don't know if it is my issue or it was here, but other than that audio was very good.

HisCoconutGun responds:

Nah its probably a me problem, the audio was a little iffy here and there, some lines were a bit muffled, but eh, whatcha gonna do. Hopefully next time its a bit more clear

[Age of Gar - out of the blank]

It was so fun to watch, I checked the earlier ones and I'm very impressed how you changed direction of it from being random and clunky to then it being so stylized.
One thing I noticed you there is no episode 2 between 1b and 3 neither here or on yt. Does it exist or you just skipped it?

AgeofGar responds:

I like it, You're paying attention. I'll leave it at that for now.
Thank you !

[The Spring Breakdown part 2]

The writing is so awkard, but animation is weirdly hypnotizing. Interesting combo.

sheepishlyoutgoing responds:

Thanks!

[Hello Knobhead]

Very charming. A lot of great expressions, even tho it is one second long.

MissWonderBan responds:

Thank you! I'm actually planning on redoing it since I did it back in 2022. Hopefully I can make it longer and fix some issues.